As joking about German words works incredibly well in English, here’s the original:

There you go. Now you can be sure that the joke’s just as funny as originally intended.

  • sab@kbin.social
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    1 year ago

    I find it easy to read, but in terms of constructive feedback I would try to write the letters larger. As there’s a lot of whitespace in the speech bubbles, the text could be made quite a bit bigger without even needing bigger bubbles.