Grayox@lemmy.ml to Memes@lemmy.ml · edit-211 months agoCapital is dead laborlemmy.mlimagemessage-square19fedilinkarrow-up1306arrow-down153
arrow-up1253arrow-down1imageCapital is dead laborlemmy.mlGrayox@lemmy.ml to Memes@lemmy.ml · edit-211 months agomessage-square19fedilink
minus-squarethemeatbridge@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up10·edit-211 months agoThere are too many commas and the phrasing is awkward. The first and last two commas are grammatically incorrect.
There are too many commas and the phrasing is awkward. The first and last two commas are grammatically incorrect.