I’m guessing he’s just pointing out that it is incorrect grammar and wondered if you were a native speaker.
Replace “of” with “have”, and you’re golden 👍
Looks close enough to the Pokémon brand, that I wouldn’t be surprised if a Nintendo lawsuit is on the way. Even some of the creatures seem like straight up copies 😅
“Mysterious plane explosion”…… Sure 😅
It takes a lot have practice and a lot have commitment. But by the end have it, you’ll be much better havef